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Frisk/Chara by torieI-ton

I am going to apologize for if this comes off as harsh. I am going to try and be as constrictive with this as I can. One of the first t...

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I just want to say that this is a great piece of art that you have made. I am glad that this was made because as someone who is slightl...

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Dog and Carla-WIP by Airi666
Dog and Carla-WIP
So, I have been working on this on and off, but here is a present for Dog and Carla. They are always so cute together, I hope you like it. I will finish coloring it later :D
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Frisk/Chara by torieI-ton
I am going to apologize for if this comes off as harsh. I am going to try and be as constrictive with this as I can.

One of the first things that my eye was drawn to when I look at this is the line work/line dividing the picture in half. The line work is a nice consistancy that I do enjoy seeing for a more cartoony look. The only thing that i really have to say is that it is a little rough and wobbly which I can attribute to hands shaking, especially if this was done with a mouse. Which Low key here drawing with a mouse is hard and you have my kudos for that.

The second thing that I notice is that there are a few small sections where the color from one section bleeds into another like the purple from the Frisk side of the drawing bleeding into their hands. The coloring itself is really really nice, and I do enjoy it. The one thing that I can say is if you have photoshop or Sai is to use layers to kind of alleviate with that bleeding. A free tool I can recommend if you do not own either is pixlr, it is a free online version of photo shop and good for learning how layers work.

The only real complaint I have so far is shading, I don't see any real shading in the picture that gives me an impression of the changes in lighting like if the sun is shinning through a hole onto firsk or darkness is causing shadows on Chara's face. A really easy way to do that is to take the skin color and just darken it by one shade and doing a small outline.


All together the piece is really nice, and I like your style of drawing I think that if you put those small things to use it will totally look amazing, It will be interesting to watch you grow and mature as an artist. I am rooting for you.
Draw again meme by Airi666
Draw again meme
Left 2008 
right now

Characters name is Nami, I might bring her back with a diffrent not so cringe worthy outfit. 

I really like how this turned out...I was getting distracted but it took all day to finish.
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Okasaan promo art by Airi666
Okasaan promo art
promo for my game of the female playable character.

I used a still from Kodomo no Jinka as a ref for pose as I suck
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Male Character-Eric concept sketch by Airi666
Male Character-Eric concept sketch
Eric is a silent kid, he follows around with the girls antics since he dating one of the girls. He is the defualt main character of the game in art and everything. 
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yep,  the 2nd was my birthday I am now 24...I feel older and have decided it is time to be healthier. I cut out soda and I am trying to but FAILING terribly at waking up at 7am to go running.

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thank you for adding me to your friends list 
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Btw your gallery is awesome! Love your drawings :D
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Airi666 Featured By Owner May 23, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD oh why thank you your galleries great too.
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Dawww thanks
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Thank you very much for the watch. I really appreciate it.
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Thank You for the watch!!:D (Big Grin)  I really appreciate!Hug 
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